Talk:Ben Affleck/GA1
Latest comment: 15 years ago by ThinkBlue in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
"Benjamin Géza Affleck-Boldt;[1] August" → "Benjamin Géza Affleck-Boldt[1] on August"References should be formatted according to WP:CITE/ES; I suggest using {{cite web}}. Unformatted references include 2 and 3."Noble events" actually only discusses about one event; it can be merged into "Personal life"- Done.
The lead has three, fairly short paragraphs. Either expand the third one or cut it down to two paragraphs, since the article as a whole is not long enough that it necessarily requires three lead paragraphs."He quit smoking" paragraph can probably be merged with the previous paragraph about his tattoos, as they are somewhat related and both paragraphs are extremely short."During the final" can also be merged with the previous paragraph as they are related and the previous paragraph is really short