Talk:Belly of the Beast

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Centrepull in topic Plot

Plot edit

The plot syntax is taken almost verbatim from the summary at TV.com.William L. Schlotterer (talk) 02:08, 7 September 2008 (UTC)Reply

Not any more it isn't. I've thoroughly chopped and screwed it. It had poor grammar, little info aside from really excessive plot exposition, poor linking, unfortunately very poorly edited on top of all that. I've made a start, and really cut down and improved the plot detail, but I'm not qualified to add requisite info about the film's critical reception etc. Centrepull (talk) 02:23, 16 April 2011 (UTC)Reply