Talk:Beijing Workers' Autonomous Federation

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Regarding tagged for neutrality, worldwide view, and copy-editing edit

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The article focused on the the worker and the student. Perhaps more coverage can be assigned to the government response for a more complete picture? Copy edit tag refers to the tone and grammer ♠♠ BanëJ ♠ ♠ 06:53, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

I agree about the grammar and made revisions to the first half. Soulparadox 07:03, 20 March 2012 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Soulparadox (talk • contribs)

I hope I don't come across as too arrogant in thinking I fixed all of those issues in my copy editing. I definitely toned down any POV statements I found (I actually chuckled when I saw the word "alas" used), and I think BanëJ is slightly misunderstanding the worldwide view tag. I agree more information on government response would be helpful to this article, but it's not really a worldwide view issue. I'm not sure you can really have that with an organization whose activities were confined to one country. --BDD (talk) 04:15, 8 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

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