Talk:Bedtime Story (Madonna song)/GA2
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 18:24, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
Side note edit
I love this song and Björk so much and would be glad to review this!! :)
Infobox edit
Lead edit
- "...American singer Madonna forher sixth studio album..." --> "...American singer Madonna for her sixth studio album..."
- "was written by Björk...and was the first time the former wrote a song for a Madonna album." --> Wasn't it also the only time she wrote a song for Madonna?
Background and release edit
- "...on the soul musical scene," --> soul musical scene? Shouldn't it be soul music scene?
- "Madonna also wanted to explore the British club musical scene" --> Same here
Recording and composition edit
- Doesn't sound right to me; shouldn't it be: "Unlike Madonna's more up-tempo, melodic work, the song is slower and has less melody but complex rhythmic structure.[9]" --> "Unlike Madonna's more up-tempo, melodic work, the song is slower and has less melody but a more complex rhythmic structure.[9]"
- Rest is great
Critical reception edit
- "in a review for the album as a whole..." --> "in a review for the parent album as a whole..."
- "author Victor Amaro Vicente wrote in his book," --> "Author Victor Amaro Vicente wrote in his book,"
Commercial performance edit
- "she would have achieved a consecutive string of 33 top 40 hits, starting from her single "Holiday" (1983)." --> "She would have achieved a consecutive string of 33 top 40 hits, starting from her single "Holiday" (1983)."
- "On the Canadian RPM Top Singles chart it reached a peak of number 46.[28]" --> "On the Canadian RPM Top Singles chart, it reached a peak of number 46.[28]"
Music video edit
Background and development edit
- "About 20 days later Shaffer dropped the final sketches at Propaganda Films, who were producing the video.[38]" --> "About 20 days later, Shaffer dropped the final sketches at Propaganda Films, who were producing the video.[38]"
- Rest is flawless; great work! :)
Reception and analysis edit
- "The music video has also drawn comparisons to Tarsem Singh's films, The Fall (2006) and The Cell," --> What year was The Cell released in to stay consistent?
Live performances and legacy edit
- "A Junior Vasquez remix of the song was performed at the 1995 Brit Awards, Madonna wore a white Versace dress and long hair extensions, an image similar to the Versace advertisement campaign she was promoting." --> A comma in between "Brit Awards" and "Madonna" is incorrect and should be either a period or a semi–colon.
Track listings and formats edit
- Fantastic!
Charts edit
- Great! :)