Talk:Bea Ballard

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Sitush in topic Promo

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This article reads like a resume.

Promo

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This reads like a promo/c.v. & is very irritating in its repeated formulaic "from X to Y, to Z, to A" structure as a means of presenting lists as prose. Needs a pretty big rewrite and sources. - Sitush (talk) 07:45, 18 August 2021 (UTC)Reply