Talk:Battle of Orbetello

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Rp0211 in topic GA Review
Good articleBattle of Orbetello has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
July 1, 2012Good article nomineeListed
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This article needs a copyedit by a native English speaker.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:40, 11 September 2010 (UTC)Reply

GA Nomination

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It seems to me that this article could be nominated for GA status. I'm not an editor of the article, just a person who is a part of WP Spain that looks for potential GA articles. I wasn't intentionally looking for them today (or lately, for that matter), but this article is appears to be worthy for a review. If I'm providing an inconvience for the editor(s), I apologize in advance. Thanks for reading! LeftAire (talk) 22:55, 21 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Battle of Orbetello/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 19:57, 24 June 2012 (UTC)Reply


GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  


Infobox

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  • No issues

Lead

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  • The Battle of Orbetello (also known as the Battle of Isola del Giglio)[3] was a major naval engagement of the Franco-Spanish War of 1635, End the first sentence here to comply with WP:BEGINNING
  • ...when another Spanish army led by Marquis of Torrecuso and Duke of Arcos which had come from the Kingdom of Naples across the Papal States, Add comma between "Arcos" and "which"

Background

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  • For this purpose was gathered in Toulon a fleet... Fix prose of this phrase

Battle

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  • Fix the sentences where the sentences start with numbers that are not spelled out

Aftermath

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  • Fix the prose of the image description in this section to make it more understandable

Notes

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  • No issues

References

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  • No issues


After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not concern good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 (talk2me) 20:16, 24 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Since all issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 (talk2me) 18:20, 1 July 2012 (UTC)Reply