Talk:Battle of Lauron
Latest comment: 5 years ago by 73.47.8.174 in topic Rewrite of this article
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Rewrite of this article edit
This entire article needs to be rewritten to follow the standard objective telling of the events. Currently, it is written too dramatically, and doesn't include in-text sources when it mentions specific events taking place.
Also, the grammar and spelling is horrendous. I gave us trying to fix it since this needs to be rewritten anyway. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 73.47.8.174 (talk) 04:45, 31 December 2018 (UTC)