Talk:Battle of Azcapotzalco

Latest comment: 11 years ago by MrNiceGuy1113 in topic Note to Author

Note to Author edit

Hi, I have gone through this article, editing it as best as possible for language and consistency. But a few things need to be resolved.

In The opening paragraph what should be the real word here instead of "realistic forces", would it be "Royalist forces"?

I have edited out the below sentence as it made no sense in the story and is just lost and still is a bit: "The realistic general Manuel Concha went to his headquarters in Tacubaya when the gun fire began."

Possible to clear these up? Would be great.

Many thanks,

Mr. NiceGuy (MrNiceGuy1113 (talk) 10:03, 2 October 2012 (UTC))Reply