Talk:Battle Ax

Latest comment: 3 years ago by 2601:200:C000:1A0:84B1:CCC0:70FF:37D9 in topic Bad introduction

Bad introduction

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It's a very bad article if the first two sentences each use some term unfamiliar to the vast majority of readers.

It's fine to use "shield volcano" and "andesite" if you explain them in the text.

It is not fine if a visitor has to click on a link in order to know what either one of the introductory sentences is trying to say.2601:200:C000:1A0:84B1:CCC0:70FF:37D9 (talk) 15:05, 25 January 2021 (UTC)Reply