Talk:Batman Beyond: Return of the Joker (video game)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 17:44, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi! I will review this article due to the ongoing GAN backlog. I will start the review soon. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 17:44, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Comments

General

• Missing space "Doug Perry of IGNand Rodney Gall..." → "Doug Perry of IGN and Rodney Gall...
  • Man, even after checking these things so much I still miss things. Good catch! Fixed 👨x🐱 (Nina CortexxCoco Bandicoot) 15:42, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
• I found a typo: "The music and sound were also not without criticism" – I think that this was meant to be typed out like this → "The music and sound were also met with criticism".
  • I don't think "not without" is an incorrect way of describing it, but I have changed it. 👨x🐱 (Nina CortexxCoco Bandicoot) 15:42, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
• Rest of the article is well-written. It is broadly written and it contains both positive and negative reviews.

Images

• There are none except the cover, although some gameplay footage can be added from here I guess?

Sources

• All are alright.

@HumanxAnthro: On hold until these two minor issues get fixed. Good job. --Vacant0 (talk) 14:16, 7 January 2022 (UTC)

Promoting. Vacant0 (talk) 15:51, 7 January 2022 (UTC)