Talk:Bart to the Future/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Theleftorium in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 16:04, 12 August 2012 (UTC)
- Lede: Link animated
- Lede: Add television between animated and sitcom
- Lede: Link sitcom
- Lede: Only Fox should be linked, not network
- Lede: The reception → Reception to
- Plot: "some government job." needs to be referenced, because its a direct quote
- Actually, no it doesn't. Since this a quote from the episode and not an "external source" it doesn't need to be referenced. Theleftorium (talk) 16:26, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- Production: Link 1999–2000 to US TV schedules
- Production: audio commentary is really a common term, WP:OVERLINK
- Release: Only Fox should be linked, not network
- Release: How can an episode get reception, get "reviews"
- Release: "which was met" was makes it sound funny. So, just remove, and it'll be fine.
- Release: and noted that Entertainment Weekly "rightly dubbed [it] the 'worst episode ever". Repetitive as already above. Just don't need to say what one critic said about another critic from EW.
- I think you might be missing the point here, it is the "rightly" part that is important. This critic also considers the episode to be the worst episode of the series. Theleftorium (talk) 16:26, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- References: Ref. 3 is Yahoo! TV, Yahoo! is the publisher of it
- External links: Categories should be sorted in alphabetical order
Excellent work. On hold for now. TBrandley 15:48, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review TBrandley! :) Theleftorium (talk) 16:26, 21 August 2012 (UTC)