conflict between him and his father, William – no comma needed
Mark McCormick, a friend of Sanders told him that – comma after Sanders
Sanders told him that his father told McCormick – McCormick should just be him
3,248 total all-purpose yards, 234 points, 39 total touchdowns, – the word and needs to be before 39
investigation by the NCAA, and later was given – no comma needed
Sanders had applied silicone to his person – his person should be just himself
In Week 7, Sanders set several then career highs – then career highs should have hyphens in between the words
114-yards and a touchdown and 28 attempts for 145-yards respectively – comma before respectively
Sanders ranked third in rushing touchdowns and ranked sixth in rushing attempts respectively, and was – respectively and the comma are not needed
was ranked sixth in total yards per rushing attempt with 5.1 rushing – comma before with
two touchdowns of 2-yards and 23-yards respectively on 30 attempts – comma before respectively
the Bert Bell Award.[1]The Lions finished the regular season with – there needs to be a space between the reference and the
out the 38–6 victory, he recorded five receptions – replace he recorded with just recording
Divisional Round in the prior season, and would eventually win the Super Bowl that season. Sanders – no comma before and and replace the period with a comma
Sanders recorded 18 attempts for 108-yards, the Lions – replace the comma with a semicolon
44–38 victory against the Minnesota Vikings, he had a 53-yard rush but fumbled – replace the comma with a semicolon
and second in the league in rushing yards per game behind Smith – who is Smith? I assume its Emmitt Smith but his first name and a link shold be there
career rushing yards rankings, ranking tenth all-time – remove the word rankings
I finished all of these, waiting for more.
more to come...
t80+ yards (82-yards and 80-yards respectively – comma before respectively
season, and become only the third running back in history to reach 2,000 rushing yards – change become to became. Also remove the word only
Pro Bowl and first team All-Pro teams, and awarded his second Bert Bell Award – no comma needed
All-Pro four times in 1992, 1993, 1996 and 1998 – comma after 1996
inducted him in 2004 and 2005 respectively. – comma before respectively
elusive runner in NFL history, and was placed – no comma needed
Sanders' oldest son, Barry J. Sanders, played running back for Stanford University from 2012 to 2015, and at Oklahoma State University in 2016, after a highly successful high school career: as a freshman in 2008, Barry ran for 742 yards and twelve touchdowns while helping Heritage Hall School to the 2008 Oklahoma 2A state title, and he was the only sophomore on the 2009 Tulsa World all-state team. – this is a way too long stringy sentence
All are done. NSNW (talk) 03:30, 8 June 2022 (UTC)Reply
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
biography.jrank.org is unreliable according to WP:RSN
for his on-field humility. Despite his flashy playing style, Sanders was rarely seen celebrating after the whistle was blown. Instead, he handed the ball to a referee or congratulated his teammates. He was recognized for putting his teams' success over his stats, as shown when he denied a request from head coach Wayne Fontes to return to play in a game so that he could gain enough rushing yards to become the rushing leader for that season. – there is no source for this
Sanders was not fond of this as he believed Thomas to be a good teammate. Thomas moved on to the NFL in 1988 which allowed Sanders to become the starter for his junior year. – there is no source for this
spotchecks for ref 5, 16, 23, 31, 47, 56, 70, 82, 99, 122, and 142 are all good
