Talk:Bara Gumbad/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:04, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Will review this. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 15:04, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Update: A bit busy now, I think I will be able to get to this only by the end of this week. Cheers! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 18:44, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

@AKS.9955: You appear to be inactive since January 2016. I will seek help at WP:WikiProject India. If there is no response within a week from now, I would be forced to fail this nomination. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 11:12, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• Citations are typically excluded from the lead unless controversial statements are involved
• Ensure that all facts in the lead are also mentioned in the main text
• 400 meters South-West Convert template needed twice in this line. Say "southwest"
• village Khairpur No italics needed

History

• constructed in 1490 Say AD/BC
• It's construction It's means "it is". Write "Its"
• Add a word on who Sikandar Lodi was
• tells the date "gives" is better than "tells"
• During the rule of Sikander Lodhi Why link him again? Also, you are referring to him differently now.
• Say Lodi or Lodhi
• inaugurated by Lady Willingdon Who was she?

Construction and architecture

• The platform measures 30 metres (98 ft) (East-West) and 25 metres (82 ft) (North-South) No caps needed for the directions.
• Duplicate link: Shisha Gumbad
• A string of citations is not needed unless the claims are very strong (WP:OVERCITE). I would recommend using at most three in each case.

Location

• No italics for Khairpur.

These done, I would be happy to promote this. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 11:12, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

@Sainsf: I've addressed these issues. utcursch | talk 20:09, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for resolving the issues. I believe the article can be promoted now. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 08:18, 2 April 2016 (UTC)