Talk:Banded bullfrog/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by GhostRiver in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 21:33, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
Hello! I'll be taking a look at this article for the January 2022 GAN backlog drive. If you haven't already signed up, please feel free to join in! Although QPQ is not required, if you're feeling generous, I also have a list of GA nominations of my own right here.
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Infobox and lede edit
- No comma needed after "dark brown back"
- "low altitudes"
- Where is it a potential invasive species?
Taxonomy and etymology edit
- Good
Description edit
- Why are the gram weights not converted into imperial units, but all the length measurements are?
Distribution and habitat edit
- Good
As an invasive species edit
- Both
the invasive population is under control
andno established invasive population has been found
need "as of" qualifiers, as those statements are liable to change.
Behaviour and ecology edit
as soon as rain falls
I'd go with either "immediately after rainfall" or "soon after rainfall" depending on what's more consistent with the source; sounds a little more encyclopedic- No comma needed after "walking and burrowing"
where they can remain for a long time
How long?- "daytime" or "daylight hours"
Diet, predators, and parasites edit
- No parentheses around
from opening of the mouth to closing
Pet trade edit
- Most of the first para feels a little trivia/WikiHow-y, save for the sentence about the peat-soil mixes
- "3 to 4 times" → "three to four times" per MOS:NUMERAL
- "attributed to its muted colours" → "attributed to the bullfrog's muted colours"
Status and threats edit
- Switch the two sentences and take out "therefore" in the IUCN sentence
References edit
- Looks good
General comments edit
- Images are properly licensed and obviously relevant
- No stability concerns in revision history
- Earwig score looks good
Thank you for your patience; I have been working through several health issues both physical and mental. Putting on hold now. — GhostRiver 17:44, 18 February 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks GhostRiver, and no problem at all. I hope you feel better on all fronts soon. Responded to each point above, let me know if you see any other issues! DanCherek (talk) 18:45, 18 February 2022 (UTC)