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Reviewer: Burningclean (talk · contribs) 01:24, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
Honestly the only thing I see that need to be done is a little bit of rewording in the lead. "It was recorded across February 2009 and April 2009 with producer Brendan O'Brien—who was working with the band for the fourth time, and the first since 1998's Yield—on both Henson Recording Studios in Los Angeles, California and O'Brien's own Southern Tracks Recording in Atlanta, Georgia." That seems to be too long of a sentence. Split it into to or three if you could. And rather than "on both Henson Recording..." it should be "in both Henson..." Burningclean [speak] 01:24, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
- Note I informed the nominator that I would be willing to co-nominate, as I was the nominator on the first, failed GA. Also note that the main contributor to the article was User:-5-, who is no longer active on these topics, but whom I informed the first time around. —Justin (koavf)❤T☮C☺M☯ 03:08, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
I'm going to pass this quickly. Everything from the first nomination was addressed already, and my one concern was taken care of. This article came to GAN well prepared this time around. Burningclean [speak] 02:00, 17 June 2012 (UTC)