Talk:Backlash (2004)/GA1

Latest comment: 16 years ago by SRX in topic GA Review

GA Review

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GA Review by SRX
Lead
  • Great wording, though I suggest adding a paragraph about the aftermath/background.
Background
Event
  • Before the event went live on pay-per-view, Val Venis defeated Matt Hardy in a match taped for Sunday Night HEAT. - per WP:PW/MOS, HEAT should follow the same rule as iMPACT, and be in regular font format.
  • The third match of the event was Chris Jericho versus Christian and Trish Stratus in a Handicap match, in which Jericho defeated both Christian and Stratus. - Why is the result shown before hand, while other's aren't in that format.
  • The match ended when Victoria pinned Lita after an Inside Cradle after Lita got a near fall on Victoria. - the last part "after Lita got a near..." is redundant and not relevant in that sentence.
  • Cactus continued, as he poured gasoline on the bat and tried to light it on fire. - continued what?
  • Assaults by both men took effect, until Orton managed to pin Cactus after an RKO on a barbed wire baseball bat - the first part of the sentence doesn't flow with the rest of it, consider revising.
  • Edge, however, reversed assaults by Kane, who he then attempted to spear. - attempted "to spear"? remove "to" and reword it into saying that he performed a spear.
Aftermath
  • Written well, I saw no flaws other than jargon, but not to worry for now.

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    Per comments above.
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  
    Written very good; though a couple of prose issues, until they are addressed, the article is   On hold for the time being, good luck in improving the article.--SRX 03:28, 19 July 2008 (UTC)Reply
Ok great work.   Pass--SRX 15:19, 19 July 2008 (UTC)Reply