Talk:Bachata Number 1's, Vol. 3/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 03:40, 30 September 2013 (UTC)

I'll give this a review sometime tomorrow. Wizardman 03:40, 30 September 2013 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:

• "The first two in the series were released in 2008 and 2009 respectively." comma before respectively.
• "The bachata-infused-R&B number," no comma needed, though I know that makes the reference right there a bit iffy.
• ""Jasmine" is Dominican bachata group Grupo Rush's, which is composed of Damian, Migz, Lenny, and Khriz, single from their debut album We On Fire (2009)" the member splice between Rush's and single makes this sentence hard to read; reword.
• "It reached #6 on the" all the other numbers are written out; make consistent

Not much to fix, I'll put the article on hold and pass when fixed. Wizardman 16:45, 30 September 2013 (UTC)

I've addressed your raised issues. Thank you for your review. — DivaKnockouts 18:38, 30 September 2013 (UTC)

Looks good, article passes. Wizardman 20:16, 30 September 2013 (UTC)