Talk:Ba Congress/GA1
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Kges1901 (talk · contribs) 13:09, 1 September 2019 (UTC)
- Lead is a wall of text, suggest including an image
- In April 1941, World War II came to the Kingdom of Yugoslavia. unnecessarily dramatic
- The Italians, Hungarians and Bulgarians occupied and then annexed other parts of Yugoslavian territory is redundant to the second sentence of the paragraph
- Western Allies-recognised --> Western Allied-recognised
- Chetniks had failed unnecessary had
More later. Kges1901 (talk) 13:09, 1 September 2019 (UTC)
There isn't much to point out here, so one last comment:
- Views on the character of the congress vary between those - should be varied in past tense Kges1901 (talk) 23:16, 2 September 2019 (UTC)
- All done, thanks for the review, Kges1901! Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:52, 3 September 2019 (UTC)