Talk:Ba Congress/GA1

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Reviewer: Kges1901 (talk · contribs) 13:09, 1 September 2019 (UTC)Reply


  • Lead is a wall of text, suggest including an image
  • In April 1941, World War II came to the Kingdom of Yugoslavia. unnecessarily dramatic
  • The Italians, Hungarians and Bulgarians occupied and then annexed other parts of Yugoslavian territory is redundant to the second sentence of the paragraph
  • Western Allies-recognised --> Western Allied-recognised
  • Chetniks had failed unnecessary had

More later. Kges1901 (talk) 13:09, 1 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

There isn't much to point out here, so one last comment: