Talk:BRAC Onnesha

Latest comment: 6 years ago by CycloneIsaac in topic GA Review
Good articleBRAC Onnesha has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starBRAC Onnesha is part of the Birds-1 series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
February 6, 2018Good article nomineeListed
July 7, 2018Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 06:44, 20 January 2018 (UTC)Reply


Reviewing later.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 06:44, 20 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • The lead is awfully short, even for a small article. You should expand it to include more on operations and development.
  • Background section is redundant as majority of the prose is mentioned again in the development section.
  • BRAC University has built a ground station at its Mohakhali campus to analyse data and photographs sent from space for further research purposes.[citation needed]
  • $500,000 in which currency?
    • Not sure..when I converted USD to pounds, it didn't match, so I am just going to use pounds so its more clear. Kees08 (Talk)
  • "inaugurated 25 May," Of which year?
  • Future work section belongs on the Birds-1 article more (and possibly an article on the Bird program).
  • "where it was launched from the Kibō module." Should be mentioned in the main part of the article.

Should be it for now.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 02:23, 6 February 2018 (UTC)Reply