Talk:Ayer (Luis Miguel song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:10, 25 November 2022 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will get on with this now! --K. Peake 08:10, 25 November 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• The recording is not sourced as beginning in June 1992 in the body, nor is it as ending in May 1993
• Only put (A & B) per Template:Infobox song on the studio parameter

•  Not done --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

• The first para of the lead is out of order; place production as the seconds sentence, then release, followed by the Spanish language and ballad sentences

•  Not done --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

• "The track is a" → "It is a"

•  Not done --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

• "handled the track's production." → "handled the song's production."
• ""Ayer" was released as" → "It was released as"
• Move the music video sentence to being in the second para directly after commercial performance

•  Not done --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

• "and was nominated" → "and were nominated" or mention which one if you can source it
• Remove pipe on 1994 Lo Nuestro Awards

•  Not done should only be linked on one occasion --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

• Move the critical reception sentence to being the last of the first para instead
• Pipe 1994 Lo Nuestro Awards to Premio Lo Nuestro 1994 on the song of the year mention
• "it became his eight number one song" → "it became Miguel's eighth number one song"

Background and composition

• Remove the comma before Romance
• Are you sure there should be a comma before "and the United States" in this form of English?
• If the quote about not trying more boleros is a full sentence, then place the punctuation inside quotes and add a comma after replied
• "He began working with" → "The singer began working with"
• "or sing in it"." → "or sing in it."" per MOS:QUOTE
• "he decided to co-produce the album" → "the singer decided to co-produce it" to be less repetitive

•  Not done --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

• The composed sentence feels like too much of a run-on; add a comma after Aries to help with this
• "David Foster and Jeremy Lubbock's instrumental" → "Foster and Jeremy Lubbock's instrumental"
• "from Foster's 1986" → "from the former's 1986"
• ""Ayer" is a" → "It is a"

Promotion and reception

• Should there really be a comma before "and Gustavo Garzón"?
• "the videos "takes you through the" → "the videos take one "through the" because this is referring to more than one
• "each other intensely."" → "each other intensely"." per MOS:QUOTE
• Either specify which video was nominated at the 6th Annual Lo Nuestro Awards or change to they were nominated
• "On the review of album," → "In his review of the album,"
• "called it a" → "called the song a"
• Remove wikilink on Lo Nuestro Awards

•  Not done --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

• "and as well as the inaugural" → "as well as the inaugural"
• "Miguel's eight number one song" → "Miguel's eighth number one song"
• Remove pipe on Billboard
• "It was sixth best-performing" → "It was the sixth best-performing"

Personnel

Performance credits

• Make this a sub-heading instead of a sub-section

•  Not done --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

Technical credits

• Same as above

•  Not done --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

Charts

• Good

See also

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks top-notch at 2.0%!!!!
• The Miami Herald → Miami Herald on ref 1 with the wikilink
• Wikilink San Antonio Express-News on ref 2 instead of refs 6 and 16
• Wikilink El Siglo de Torreón on ref 4
• Wikilink Greenwood Publishing Group on ref 5
• Pipe Nielsen N.V. to Nielsen Holdings on ref 7
• Pipe Hearst Corporations to Hearst Communications on ref 16
• Remove Univision Communications from ref 17 and cite Univision solely as publisher instead
• Pipe Sony Music España to Sony Music on ref 27
• Pipe WEA Latina to Warner Music Latina on ref 28

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed, after this quick review! --K. Peake 09:26, 25 November 2022 (UTC)

  I'll have this done either Sunday or Monday as those are my days off from work. Erick (talk) 13:23, 25 November 2022 (UTC)

  Requesting an extra week. Erick (talk) 02:32, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

@Kyle Peake:  Done Let me know how it looks now. Erick (talk) 03:48, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

• @Magiciandude: I have marked any changes missed as not done. Cheers, --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

  Thanks! I'm just confused on how the subsections for the personnel are supposed to be done. Erick (talk) 17:09, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

• @Magiciandude: ✓ Pass now, I have copy edited this in so you know what to do in the future! --K. Peake 08:02, 5 December 2022 (UTC)