Talk:Avnillah-class ironclad/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 04:37, 16 May 2017 (UTC)

• in Design, "limited by the Ottoman Empire's limited" perhaps change one to "restricted"?
  • Works for me
• in Characteristics, where were the 75 mm QF guns mounted? Did she originally have a secondary battery?
  • The sources don't say, unfortunately.
• suggest centring the Laid down and Completed columns in the table for consistent appearance.
  • I'm not sure if that's possible with merged cells
    • Done. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 01:08, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
      • Ah, I have quite a few articles to copy that template over to! Parsecboy (talk) 01:25, 18 May 2017 (UTC)
• link Constantinople
  • Done
• worth pointing out in either the table or text that both Thames Iron Works and Samuda Brothers were in London, from the name, I assumed Samuda was a local yard until I followed the link
  • Good idea
• which Gio. Ansaldo & C. yards were they rebuilt at?
  • Added
• worth mentioning and linking/redlinking the two armored cruisers that sank Avnillah, I assume this information is available and they would be notable?
  • Good idea
• suggest using the NHHC licence template for both images, along with PD-USGov-Military-Navy
  • Done

That's me done. Placing on hold for these points to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:28, 16 May 2017 (UTC)

Thanks Peacemaker. Parsecboy (talk) 00:13, 18 May 2017 (UTC)

No prob. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 01:08, 18 May 2017 (UTC)