Talk:Aviation in Indonesia/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Pi.1415926535 (talk · contribs) 00:36, 7 April 2016 (UTC)

I'll start the review shortly. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 00:36, 7 April 2016 (UTC)

Checklist

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a) (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):

   b) (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a) (reference section):

   b) (citations to reliable sources):

   c) (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a) (major aspects):

   b) (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a )(images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):

   b) (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

This is a very high-quality article and very close to meeting the GA standards. I don't think it should take long at all to pass GA.

• It would be nice to have a better source for the number of islands - no information on the current source is easy to find in either language.
• Move the statistics on air carriers and government aircraft above the future projections in the lede.
• In the sentence "Indonesian aviation faces numerous challenges, including poorly maintained, outdated, and often overwhelmed infrastructure,[6] the factor of human error, bad weather, haze problems caused by plantation fires, and volcanic ash spewed by numerous area volcanoes that disrupts air transportation", there is the sublist of 'poorly maintained, outdated, and often overwhelmed infrastructure' inside the larger list. You may wish to divide this sentence into two parts, or to use semicolons to divide the larger list.
• The lists of how many airports have paved and unpaved runways should be converted into wikitables.
• "In Indonesia, there are 22 commercial scheduled airlines with more than 30 passengers (AOC 121), and 32 airlines for commercial scheduled airlines with 30 or less passengers and chartered airlines (AOC 135)". Is this more than 30 passengers per flight? What does AOC mean? The citation for that sentence also needs to be formatted into a template.
• The list of accidents takes up almost half of the length of the article; this is probably undue weight. It should probably be split into a separate article; I believe List of accidents and incidents involving airliners in Indonesia is the standard name.

Overall, these are relatively minor issues and should be quick to fix for promotion. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 05:18, 7 April 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for your review, I've done some of your request/suggestions. Gunkarta  talk  19:27, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

Great work, it's definitely GA quality now. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 03:08, 16 April 2016 (UTC)