Talk:Avenger Penguins

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Risssa in topic Rewrite

Rewrite

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This article needs a short lead summary followed by a longer, more comprehensive section below the menu. It also needs a "Reception" section for comments from critics and the public.

Also, it reads like a magazine article and not an encyclopedia. Rissa, Guild of Copy Editors (talk) 20:05, 6 July 2015 (UTC)Reply