Talk:Autumn Uprising of 1946

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Toobigtokale in topic Style issues

I have amended the paragraph on the events of October 1 and 2: the previous version's source is no longer available and gives a very different version to that of the two sources I was able to find. — Preceding unsigned comment added by BobBadg (talkcontribs) 21:05, 12 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

Style issues edit

Added cleanup template.

  • Lead needs to be shortened MOS:INTRO
  • No need for citations in lead unless particularly controversial claims MOS:LEAD
  • Grammar needs thorough revision; there's grammar issues in nearly every sentence
  • Typos (extra spaces in particular)
  • Excessive links MOS:OVERLINK

toobigtokale (talk) 20:17, 11 May 2023 (UTC)Reply