Talk:Auschwitz concentration camp/GA1

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Khazar2 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Robin (talk · contribs) 13:53, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for taking this on; I'll look forward to your thoughts. User:Diannaa is a conominator here, though I wasn't sure how to add her into the template. -- Khazar2 (talk) 14:00, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply

General
  • This is in the "other uses" in the hatnote; it's necessary to link to the DAB page here, I think. -- Khazar2 (talk) 16:50, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
Evacuation, death marches, and liberation
  • In November (year?), with the Soviet Red Army approaching through Poland, Himmler ordered gassing operations to cease across the Reich. --- I think it would be best to note in which year this took place.
After the war
  • On November 25, 1947, the Auschwitz Trial began in Kraków, when Poland's Supreme National Tribunal tried 40 former Auschwitz staff. --- I'm confused as to what "tried" means in this context.
  • In the sense of "tried for a crime", e.g., "she was tried for murder". -- Khazar2 (talk) 16:50, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
Owww, now I understand. Robin (talk)
Status

Since this is an expertly written and sourced article, this is all. On hold. Robin (talk) 16:43, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply

Thanks! Just let me know if these responses address your concerns sufficiently. -- Khazar2 (talk) 16:50, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
They did. Passing. Congrats! Robin (talk) 16:56, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
Fantastic work Khazar2! Congratulations. Cheers Irondome (talk) 17:04, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
Thanks! I think Diannaa ended up writing more than me here, in addition to all that formatting work, so she really deserves more of the credit even if my name's at the top-- Khazar2 (talk) 17:09, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply