Promotional tone

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This entire article seems to have been taken from a promotional pamphlet, as the corresponding tone is evident throughout the entire article. I have made a start on rectifying the issue, but there is still a long way to go.--Soulparadox (talk) 14:21, 4 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

Please do not copy edit this article. I am doing so for a class. Thank you.

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Please do not copy edit this article. I am doing so for a class. Thank you.

Please do not copy edit this article. I am doing so for a class. Thank you.

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Please do not copy edit this article. I am doing so for a class. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 134.126.149.136 (talk) 13:25, 3 October 2012 (UTC)Reply