 | This article was nominated for deletion on 20 Novmber 2005. The result of the discussion was merge. |
fuddlemark (fuddle me!) 12:26, 28 November 2005 (UTC)
I have copyedited the first sentence (in fact I've turned it into a complete and natural sentence), and added the cleanup tag. I would copyedit the rest too, which is rather ungrammatical and un-idiomatic, but I don't understand it well enough. I hope somebody who combines insight into the subject with grammar skills will edit the text and then remove the tag. Bishonen|talk 01:46, 20 November 2005 (UTC)
- I've Wikified the list properly and removed the block of text in the blue box near the end of the article - it was utterly pointless. I had a go at fixing the grammar but to be honest the entire second half of the article is pontless waffle that could refer to any forum on the internet.--Ukdan999 02:03, 21 November 2005 (UTC)