Talk:Asser Levy Recreation Center/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ArnabSaha (talk · contribs) 12:07, 21 March 2021 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

2. Is it verifiable with no original research?

   A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

   B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:

   C. It contains no original research:

   D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Comments

• In the first image, the caption "(2010)" doesn't seem good. Elaborate it.
  •  Done
• "the north and a engine room on the south." - An engine.
  •  Done
• "The building were particularly ornate" - building was.
  •  Done
• In lead and infobox it says "built in 1905–1908". Whereas in the body "Built in 1904–06". Citation [12] also says 1904–06.
  • The issue is because of conflicting sources, largely due to the National Park Service and Landmarks Preservation Commission citing a date between 1904 and 1906. However, several newspaper articles like the New-York Tribune actually give firsthand coverage of the bathhouse's opening in early 1908. In addition, the Real Estate Record said in 1905 that construction had just started. Epicgenius (talk) 13:27, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

  • I think an explanatory note will be good here.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  15:46, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

    @ArnabSaha: Thanks, I have done this. Epicgenius (talk) 18:29, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

• "separate entrances for each gender" - Any particular reason behind this?

 Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  17:59, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

@ArnabSaha: Thanks for the review. I have addressed these comments. Epicgenius (talk) 13:27, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Don't see any other major issues. So, passing this.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  20:01, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

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