Talk:Assault boat

Latest comment: 1 year ago by IrisPersephone in topic Encyclopedic tone

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Worldwide View Tag edit

I can only assume this tag was placed because it is missing German (and Canadian) assault boats. German boats required the U.S. (and probably British) to field them too. It is only my assumption as I did not place the notice. Johnvr4 (talk) 15:36, 12 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

U.S. Storm boats. edit

I'll be updating this section. Johnvr4 (talk) 15:36, 12 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

Encyclopedic tone edit

I'm going to be looking at the "Overview of the differences between British and American Storm and Assault Boats" section to hopefully try and make it look more encyclopedic. I don't like the entire layout of the article, and I am pretty sure that a lot of this section needs better citations, but I want to get the wording out of the way before I decide how to move forward.

IrisPersephone (talk) 13:28, 8 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

It gets worse. I took a look at the source cited and the entire section seems to be more-or-less copy-pasted directly. This might take longer than I thought.
IrisPersephone (talk) 13:47, 8 December 2022 (UTC)Reply