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![]() | Asifa Lahore was nominated as a Media and drama good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (March 29, 2024, reviewed version). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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Nominator: GnocchiFan (talk · contribs)
Reviewer: Kusma (talk · contribs) 16:31, 29 March 2024 (UTC)
I am sorry you have been waiting for this review for such a long time, but it is still a quickfail. At 2074 bytes / 359 words, this is barely long enough for DYK and there is no evidence this is anywhere near broad coverage. A huge amount of the sourcing is basically interviews. There seem to be source to text fidelity issues ("The two separated quickly" is not the same as "after six months, during which time he sought out counselling and support from LGBT charities, he ended the relationship"). The subject's civil union / marriage / susbsequent separation is not mentioned. We learn almost nothing about "Muslim Drag Queens", "Punjabi Girl" or "Always Asifa". This is nowhere near being a Good Article and needs a massive expansion before it is worth looking at the prose in detail. —Kusma (talk) 16:31, 29 March 2024 (UTC)