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So far I mainly just copyedited for good English style. I removed the word "extraordinary," since it is pretty POV. Do all of those external links need to be there? They seem to be redundant. (They would be inappropriate commercial links on almost any other page, but perhaps they are OK here since they are directly pertinent.) -- Spireguy 22:25, 23 October 2006 (UTC)Reply

Good information about Ashraf

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The article is good information wise but need more classifications in the interest of Mountain climbers lovers,--Ali Mohammad Khilji (talk) 21:58, 12 June 2009 (UTC)Reply


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I have fix the reference link hope this will help the Article for notability, --Aslam Kassi 20:21, 10 October 2009 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by Aslam Kassi (talkcontribs)

Merged the mountaineering and honours sections

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As they both covered similar subjects I've merged these two. [Apart from that, there were errors and discrepancies in the Honours mentioned.] Qwrk (talk) 16:12, 19 July 2010 (UTC)Reply