Talk:Artificial Intelligence (EP)/GA1
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 10:35, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
This article fails one of the six GA criteria, in such an undeniable way.
- Let's begin to take a closer look at the infobox genre, it is dubbed as a "comedy" album. However the composition section states "incorporates elements of comedy music", elements of something don't make it a genre. A rock album can incorporate elements of pop music but doesn't make it a pop album.
- It is well written enough but is no surprise when it completely fails the criteria: "Broad in its coverage" as the Recording, Composition, Promotion, and Critical reception have one sentence each.
- Missing some authors on the references.
- It can't address the main aspects of the topic; once again it doesn't have enough information as it is present.
- On the Commercial performance, Triple J is not considered a chart like ARIA or others. It is just a radio station like many others in Australia, sure it's a nice accolade, but I wouldn't bring it up on the commercial performance. On top of this, doesn't Cardy work for Triple J? Makes it even less worthy.
- On the personnel section; no engineers, mixing, mastering? I find it hard to believe, once again the information is probably not available.
To sum up, and this is not your fault, the range of coverage is alarming for this article. I'm not sure as it is B-status, at best it could be a start article. I strongly advise you to take a look at other GA and FA articles as there are plenty of them. Please don't nominate this or any other article in this shape, again. As of right now, you can't address the big issue within the usual time, as to bring this article to the aforementioned status would require a lot of research on the web, books and other sources you can get your hands on. I believe I have justified myself regarding the quick-fail of this article. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:14, 2 June 2022 (UTC)