Talk:Armin Maiwald

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Schwede66 in topic Article structure

Article structure edit

Thanks for this article - it's an interesting read for somebody who has grown up with the Mouse. I'd just like to point out that the lead should summarise the article and be able to stand by itself. It currently doesn't achieve that and states details that are not contained in the article itself, so here's my suggestion for an improvement. Schwede66 18:28, 23 November 2010 (UTC)Reply