Talk:Arden Valley Road/GA2
Latest comment: 15 years ago by Rschen7754 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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- Lead:
mention that NY is in the US. to be... placed in a cage? RD: soon after... what? Park by itself should not be capitalized. History: What is left of the pen currently remains in existence. - seems awkward. - I would cite a more reliable source for the length of the AT if possible. Otherwise no problems.
- Any information on who built the underpass / ford? Otherwise broad.
- Neutral, stable, images good. Map would be nice.
On hold Just a few minor things. Of course, the usual warning about short articles and FAC. --Rschen7754 (T C) 21:30, 30 December 2008 (UTC)
- Updated. --Rschen7754 (T C) 21:56, 30 December 2008 (UTC)
Due to the holidays I'm extending the deadline until 00:00 UTC January 10th. --Rschen7754 (T C) 19:02, 3 January 2009 (UTC)
- Deadline extended until the 13th 00:00. However, it will be failed at that time without the improvements. --Rschen7754 (T C) 02:28, 10 January 2009 (UTC)
Passing. Not possible to fix the above concerns. --Rschen7754 (T C) 22:18, 12 January 2009 (UTC)