FAC objections:

  • Article is still a bit too long (aim for <40k?) (in progress; current size considered okay)
  • Advertising section needs heavy copyediting and condensing
  • Explain more technical terms and people inline [1]
  • Add a key, explaining color-coding on: {{Timeline of Macintosh models}} (listed here because this is the only use of the template) this still needs the attention of someone who knows more about macs than I do