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Protocol officer edit
The article indicates that he joined the Air Force after high school and served for four years as a protocol officer. "Protocol officer" (see here: [1]) indicates that he was a commissioned officer, but I find it hard to believe that he was a commissioned officer straight out of high school. 71.42.235.104 (talk) 18:46, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
Hmm..... The dates really seem dubious in this article. Born in May, 1965 and graduated high school in 1986. That would put him at age 21 by the time he graduated high school. While This may, in fact, be true, I think that with most people graduating high school between the ages of 17 to 19, it's worth noting why he graduated so late when compared with his peers. Was it due to an illness that caused him to start school late? Illness in childhood that caused him to have to repeat a few grades, or did he just struggle in school and failed several years, having to repeat? Or, maybe some other explanation exists.
Problem edit
This article has a fundamental error in that it plagiarizes or "lifts" information (paragraphs of it) verbatim from this source or one just like it. informationcradle.com/anthony-melchiorri Obviously the article should be rewritten and that will take a little bit of time. As for the issue raised about Melchiorri's military career and how he became a commissioned officer, it may be difficult to find that information. Forward01 (talk) 07:47, 26 July 2022 (UTC)
- @Forward01: so...you found yourself a garbage-named content mill website that is made of garbage, within a galaxy of ripoffs where Wikipedia is the ultimate free source in the universe... and you took it upon yourself to nominate *that* random site as the source, about some random guy. Okay. — Smuckola(talk) 08:12, 26 July 2022 (UTC)