Talk:Anthony Ciulla

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Jack Frost in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Jack Frost (talk) 02:49, 4 September 2021 (UTC)Reply

Created by Kuriosatempel (talk) and BuySomeApples (talk). Nominated by BuySomeApples (talk) at 20:14, 23 August 2021 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   @BuySomeApples and Kuriosatempel: Well done! Please clear up the close paraphrasing issues from earwig, and correct those—Also, I think you could make a hook out of the witness protection program thing. otherwise, we're looking good theleekycauldron (talkcontribs) (they/them) 19:57, 27 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hi @Theleekycauldron: thanks for the review! I've fixed the paraphrasing issue. How does ALT2 sound? BuySomeApples (talk) 00:50, 28 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
ALT2:... that Anthony "Big Tony" Ciulla had to enter the United States Federal Witness Protection Program after he testified in a trial about rigged horse races?
@BuySomeApples:   good to go! All three hooks are approved, although despite the effort to make one about the WPP, ALT1 is my preference. Something about the words "massive horse-fixing enterprise" which I just love. theleekycauldron (talkcontribs) (they/them) 01:07, 28 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
I do appreciate that you humoured my hook suggestion, that was kind of you :) theleekycauldron (talkcontribs) (they/them) 01:07, 28 August 2021 (UTC)Reply