Talk:Anthony Anderson (basketball)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 16:54, 17 April 2016 (UTC)

I'll have this done by tomorrow. JAGUAR  16:54, 17 April 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

• "He closed his college career at UMass as its second-best three-point shooter" - this needs a link
  • Already linked previously in the paragraph at University of Massachusetts Amherst. The basketball team is also linked at Minutemen.
• Do you know what year the image was taken in the sophomore section? Could be worth mentioning in caption
  • The court image is from 2013, but I am not sure where to add it in the caption, because it is not from the year that Anderson scored his 1,000th point.
• Try splitting paragraphs in the Collegiate career section - some readers might find long paragraphs too uncomfortable to read
  • Done.
• The personal life section should be moved to the top, under the "high school career" section
  • Are you sure, because this is usually not done with basketball player biographies? (see Tyrone Garland, Khris Middleton, Zach Auguste, or just about any other example)
• No dead links
• No dab links

I'm going to pass this outright. The article is excellent, well written and comprehensive. I couldn't find anything to put this on hold, as in my opinion it's looking FA worthy. I would recommend still applying my suggestions as it might help things for the reader. Good work with this! JAGUAR  13:05, 18 April 2016 (UTC)

@Jaguar: Thank you for the review, and I will definitely try to get it promoted to a FA down the road. I have made some of the changes that you recommended. TempleM (talk) 20:18, 18 April 2016 (UTC)