Talk:Anglo-Italian Cup/GA1
Latest comment: 14 years ago by Pmlinediter in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Will start the review tomorrow. Pmlineditor Talk 16:33, 7 September 2009 (UTC)
Lead
edit- 3 items? Expand this please. And we need sources for it.
- Why is "Alitalia Challenge Cup", "Talbot Challenge Cup" and "Gigi Peronace Memorial" bolded?
- Club's founder needs article.
History
edit- "The Football League Cup was changed in 1967 so the winner would be awarded a place in the Inter-Cities Fairs Cup." - How was it changed?
- However, when Queens Park Rangers won the final that year they were in the Third Division and, at that time, UEFA did not allow third-tier teams to compete in the Inter-Cities Fairs Cup - needs punctuations
Fix these first. I'll check the rest and post tomorrow (In case I forget, ping me on my talk page). The article looks good to me; it is likely that it'll pass. :) Pmlineditor Talk 15:38, 13 September 2009 (UTC)
I haven't got much time today; will finish tomorrow. Pmlineditor Talk 15:44, 8 September 2009 (UTC)
- Grouped replies
- Lead
- I don't understand what you mean by "3 items?". However per Wikipedia:Lead_section#Length one paragraph is suitable for the lead as this article's length (~6200 characters) is well under 15000 characters. I'll try and add in another sentence perhaps. Additionally, inline citations in lead are not required per WP:LEADCITE as it is all sourced in the body of the article.
- Not the lead; the infobox. Pmlineditor Talk 15:38, 13 September 2009 (UTC)
- An infobox is part of the lead, and as such is covered under leadcite. As for the "three items" part, the infobox was the only part of this article that I didn't add. Tell me if you want it removed completely. Rambo's Revenge (talk) 16:07, 13 September 2009 (UTC)
- ChrisTheDude has expanded the infobox so hopefully it is fine now. Rambo's Revenge (talk) 22:01, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
- These are it's other names. From WP:BOLDTITLE: If the subject of the page has a common abbreviation or more than one name, the abbreviation (in parentheses) and each additional name should be in boldface on its first appearance.
- That has never been a requirement, and isn't in FAs either. However, I'll endeavour to create one, but it likely won't be until the weekend.
- An article on this person is coming along in my sandbox,
however I rather busy at the moment and probably won't get it into mainspace this week.Rambo's Revenge (talk) 22:01, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
- An article on this person is coming along in my sandbox,
- History
- It was changed so that "the winner would be awarded a place in the Inter-Cities Fairs Cup" because before 1967 they didn't, I'll try and clarify this.
- Rambo's Revenge (talk) 22:26, 8 September 2009 (UTC)
- I find the fact that the text size is only 17K a bit concerning. Can you possibly add 1-2K text somewhere? Regards, Pmlineditor Talk 15:40, 13 September 2009 (UTC)
- Checking the page, these are the main issues I find. They should be easy to fix, so ping me when you have done them. I'll give a look and will probably promote it. Pmlineditor Talk 15:58, 14 September 2009 (UTC)
Checklist
editGA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
yes
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Well, no images here, but they're probably not needed.
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Pmlineditor Talk 17:06, 16 September 2009 (UTC)