Talk:Ang Ating Musika/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Pseud 14 (talk · contribs) 18:07, 5 May 2024 (UTC)

@Pseud 14 The review is now done! Hopefully these can be addressed :) Arconning (talk) 14:03, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

@Arconning: Thanks for taking this up. All comments addressed unless otherwise stated. Let me know if clarifications are needed. Pseud 14 (talk) 14:59, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 13:08, 8 May 2024 (UTC)

• I will be reviewing this article, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Good luck to the editors! Arconning (talk · contribs)

Prose and MoS

Lede

• the catalogue of Filipino composers, change to a catalogue....
• Martin Nievera, Jona Viray, Aicelle Santos, Maricris Garcia, and Kyla performed as guest acts., April de los Santos is missing.

Background and development

• Early in her career, Regine Velasquez's music was rooted in Original Pilipino Music (OPM), which were dominated by "kundiman" ballads and bubblegum pop love songs., reword to less passive voice. Hyperlink OPM, kundiman, and bubblegum pop.

Synopsis and reception

• The stage design looked like a tropical garden adorned with grass and trees. It resembled a scaled-down version of the Philippine landmark Luneta Park., reword to a more formal tone.
• "Sinasamba Kita",, put comma inside of quotes.

This is a song title and not a sentence or phrase being quoted, so it should be outside. The MoS is If a quote ends in the middle of a sentence, we typically put a comma rather than a period at the end of the quote inside the quotation marks. Pseud 14 (talk) 14:59, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

Ooh I didn't know that, thanks for letting me know! Arconning (talk) 04:04, 11 May 2024 (UTC)

• Odette Quesada, hyperlink with Odette Quesada.
• Minsan Ang Minahal Ay AKo, lowercase k in AKo.
• "Regine's endeavor to revive Original Pilipino Music is very much appreciated and should be applauded as a noble effort to rekindle interest in our rich musical heritage., put end quotation marks.

Set list

• No issues, pass.

Shows

• List of concerts, showing date, city, venue, and guest act, pluralize guest act and showing date, possibly omit or reword city and venue.
  • This is the standard header label for tables of concerts listing the dates, etc. It is not pluralized. (See other GA examples Bruno Mars at The Chelsea, Lady Gaga Live_at Roseland Ballroom). "City" and "Venue" are not omitted or reworded. Pseud 14 (talk) 14:59, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

Personnel

• No issues, pass.

Refs

• Please hyperlink the author of source [3] and [8] using Boy Abunda, and the author of source [4] to Aster Amoyo, using "author-link=Name of Wikipedia page for author".

Spotchecks

• Earwig and manual check pass!

Images

• Images have proper licenses.

Misc.

• No ongoing edit war, focused and broad information on the topic.

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

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