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"after Reading released him on 10 May 2004 after not being offered a new contract" released and not offered a new contract is pretty redundant; cut one or the other.
"He finished the 2007–08 season with 11 appearances for Wycombe" same as above; infobox says 10. Other numbers throughout the article may not match either. Make sure to check all of them, I'm just listing these two.
"He made his international debut at the age of 19 as a 61st minute substitute in a 2–0 victory over Iraq in a friendly at The Hawthorns on 23 May 2004." this sentence feels like a run-on could it be reworded?
Reworded to "At the age of 19 his international debut came as a 61st minute substitute in a 2–0 friendly victory over Iraq at The Hawthorns on 23 May 2004". Do you think that's better? Mattythewhite (talk) 19:39, 22 August 2011 (UTC)Reply
"He is a "stylish player with a deft touch" I'd use 'he is described as' to start, feels a bit cleaner and better for NPOV purposes.
Good thing he played for Peterborough and the Trinidad national team otherwise I wouldn't have been so sure of his notability (fifth division's awfully low). I'll put the article on hold and pass when the issues are fixed. WizardmanOperation Big Bear18:13, 22 August 2011 (UTC)Reply
Indeed, had he not appeared in League One/Two for Peterborough and Wycombe and internationally for Trinidad he would have failed WP:FOOTY, but there are certainly articles with less claim to notability knocking about. Mattythewhite (talk) 19:39, 22 August 2011 (UTC)Reply
I know that feeling, at this point on the site most of the major players have article already, so nowhere to go but down. Anyway, everything looks good now so I'll pass the article. WizardmanOperation Big Bear19:55, 22 August 2011 (UTC)Reply
