Talk:AnastasiaDate/GA1
Latest comment: 9 years ago by TheQ Editor in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 00:11, 15 August 2014 (UTC)
Sorry, but this looks like a potential quick fail. I'll list the things the article needs to improve other than the NPOV problems. TheQ Editor (Talk) 00:11, 15 August 2014 (UTC)
- The lead is too short.
- main website is a dead link
- There are contractions in the article: don't, don't, haven't, isn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
- ref 27 needs accessdate
Other than that, I can't really say more until the NPOV problems are fixed. Then, I could do a final assessment of the article.TheQ Editor (Talk) 17:51, 15 August 2014 (UTC)