Talk:Among Us/Archives/2023/May

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Callmemirela in topic Semi-protected edit request on 12 May 2023


Split Proposal for Among Us

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The result of this discussion was to oppose splitting the article. ReneeWrites (talk) 16:14, 5 May 2023 (UTC)

I propose that the section "Gameplay" should be split to the "Gameplay of Among Us" article and "Among Us#Development and Release" be split into "History of Among Us". The article size of the article exceeded 100 kilobytes and both sections should pass WP:GNG. Brachy08 (Talk)(Contribs) 10:28, 22 April 2023 (UTC)

Hi Brachy0008, I'm not opposed to a split, but I don't believe the gameplay section should be spun off into its own article. I think the popularity and reception could be split into something like Cultural impact of Among Us. soetermans. ↑↑↓↓←→←→ B A TALK 11:14, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
Ok. Brachy08 (Talk)(Contribs) 06:07, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
Oppose I believe the reason the article is so large is because of the large amount of references. Half of the page is taken up by the references section and the article is full of citation overkill. Pizzaplayer219TalkContribs 13:28, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
With regards to the excessive amount of citations, would it be appropriate to remove sources if they don't say anything new compared to other sources? For example, most of the articles reporting on the chicken nugget auction more or less say the same thing. ReneeWrites (talk) 19:36, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
@ReneeWrites: Yes, use the least amount of sources possible to convey the same information. The only time new sources should be used is if they have different info that isn't in any other source. ᴢxᴄᴠʙɴᴍ () 04:47, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Oppose WP:SIZESPLIT specifically specifies readable prose size, which can be seen with various userscripts. Currently the readable prose size is 31 kB which does not justify splitting based on length alone. ― Blaze WolfTalkBlaze Wolf#6545 15:17, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
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Semi-protected edit request on 12 May 2023

Just some grammar and punctuation fixes I've noticed that are needed.

for example fixing: "While the game was initially released in 2018 to little mainstream attention, it received a massive influx of popularity in 2020 due to many Twitch streamers and YouTubers playing it and the COVID-19 pandemic. It received favorable reviews from critics on account of its fun and entertaining gameplay. The game and its stylized characters have been the subject of various internet memes."

to be specific, the line "it received a massive influx of popularity in 2020 due to many Twitch streamers and YouTubers playing it and the COVID-19 pandemic." feels slightly dragged on and could be summed up better QuantumZazzy (talk) 15:48, 12 May 2023 (UTC)

  Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. Callmemirela 🍁 20:18, 12 May 2023 (UTC)