Talk:Amir Shayesteh Tabar

Article issues

There are too many promotional or meaningless words in the article, examples: "Unique" in "known for his Unique...", "design looks fabulous", "list is endless and remarkable", "greatest living artists", and quite a lot more. Likewise the text about "surrendered to Beauty and Greatness of Divine..." needs to be replaced with a brief quote of what he actually said (it would be totally unhelpful if articles on many other artists made similar claims). Also, we do not normally have so many external links, particularly in a short article. Some of the links should be converted to references to support text in the article, while others may need to be removed. I hope to have a chance to attend to some of these issues; I am posting this now to alert other editors. Johnuniq (talk) 01:29, 4 April 2010 (UTC)

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