Talk:Amberian Dawn/GA1
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Gonna in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Mr. Gonna Change My Name Forever (talk · contribs) 07:01, 6 March 2014 (UTC)
Hello, I'm Mr. Gonna. This is the first time I ever reviewed an GA, and I've looked up Amberian Dawn as my first choice for that. I'll read it. IX|(C"<) 07:01, 6 March 2014 (UTC)
Once I read this article, I couldn't believe in its failure: The prose and grammar style are broken, and the article needs some expansion (the lead is too short). Too many references look like bare links, and there's a lot of unreferenced statements. So I give the article a quickfail. I wish you can improve this article, and maybe renominate it for GA. IX|(C"<) 07:13, 6 March 2014 (UTC)