Talk:Aloha Wanderwell

Edits

I made a lot of corrections on this article beyond the usual spelling and grammar corrections and wanted to detail them for future reference.

1. "Queen of Adventurer" [sic] removed as an occupation listed in the first paragraph, as it seems the only reference to her as the "Queen of Adventure" is on her Facebook fan page.

2. Corrected spelling of Walter's birth name to Valerian Johannes Pieczynski, per the sources listed.

3. Changed "The World's Most Travelled Girl" in the first paragraph to "The World's Most Widely Travelled Girl" per the poster on the article. (The later reference in the article included "widely" and thus was left as is.)

3. Corrected Work around the World Educational Club for International Peace to the Work around the World Educational Club for International Police.

4. Corrected the sentence claiming Idris Hall helped Walter found WAWEC and changed it to his first wife, per the source cited.

5. Removed the quotes around "driver" in the list of Hall's occupations in WAWEC, as sources indicate she really was a driver in the organization, not a "driver."

6. Corrected the name of their daughter to Valerie, per the source listed.

7. Removed the final paragraph, "Aloha Wanderwell Baker "First Woman to Drive Around the World" starting in 1920-1937, she drove in 3 Fords, Model T's, 1928 Model A's, and a 1935 Touring Sedan, 500,000 miles, in 43 countries, and 6 continents." The paragraph doesn't make much sense and sounds like notes more than anything. I couldn't find any sources to support it, either. If it gets added in, I would suggest finding a source, cleaning up the grammar, and adding it up in the body of the article rather than as a random final paragraph.

Thanks. Clockster (talk) 16:00, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

External links modified

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just added archive links to one external link on Aloha Wanderwell. Please take a moment to review my edit. If necessary, add {{cbignore}} after the link to keep me from modifying it. Alternatively, you can add {{nobots|deny=InternetArchiveBot}} to keep me off the page altogether. I made the following changes:

• Added archive http://web.archive.org/web/20150905180857/http://www.alohawanderwell.com/ to http://www.AlohaWanderwell.com

When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true to let others know.

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 18 January 2022).

• If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
• If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—^{cyberbot II}_{Talk to my owner:Online} 12:12, 26 February 2016 (UTC)