Talk:All That Is Within Me/GA1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Toa Nidhiki05 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 22:43, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox edit
- The official album cover image requires an alt, so please add one
- Just a suggestion: Instead of using commas to separate the "Genre" parameter, I would use a "flattest"
- Rest is great
Lead edit
Paragraph 2 edit
- "All That Is Within Me received mostly positive reviews from critics, some of whom considered it MercyMe's best record to that point." --> "All That Is Within Me received mostly positive reviews from critics, some of whom considered it MercyMe's best record at that point."
- "Some critics felt the album was too similar to the band's previous works." --> "However, some critics felt the album was too similar to the band's previous works."
Background and recording edit
Paragraph 1 edit
- "Following the release of their 2006 album Coming Up to Breathe, MercyMe went on tour with Audio Adrenaline." --> No source
- "By May, when the deadline was nearing for the band to begin studio recording.[5]" --> "By May, the deadline was nearing for the band to begin studio recording.[5]"
- Rest is great!
Composition edit
Paragraph 1 edit
- "The album presents a "[return] to to a church-focused theme" in comparison to the band's previous albums, which had crossover appeal to mainstream radio.[11]" --> "The album presents a "[return] to a church-focused theme" in comparison to the band's previous albums, which had crossover appeal to mainstream radio.[11]"
- Done. Toa Nidhiki05 20:07, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
Paragraph 2 edit
- ""Goodbye Ordinary" was noted as being similar to the work of the Beatles,[13][14] incorporating "guitars, distorted B-3 organ, strings, and horns"[14] and "driving guitar licks".[9]" --> ""Goodbye Ordinary" was noted as being similar to the work of the Beatles,[13][14] incorporating "guitars, a distorted B-3 organ, strings, and horns"[14] and "driving guitar licks".[9]"
Release and promotion edit
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- All of this section in its entirety is great, but there seems to be an italicizing error within the second paragraph, around "'Billboard Christian Songs chart[24]"
Critical reception and accolades edit
- In the "Professional ratings" infobox, please change "Allmusic" --> "AllMusic"
Paragraph 1 edit
- "Jared Johnson of Allmusic gave the album 4.5 out of 5 stars, saying "regardless of whether the credit goes to the change of scenery or the backs-against-the-wall pressure, it is impossible to deny that this is the group's best effort to date" and praised Millard's vocals as well as the album's "sparkling array of musical styles".[11]" --> "Jared Johnson of AllMusic gave the album 4.5 out of 5 stars, saying "regardless of whether the credit goes to the change of scenery or the backs-against-the-wall pressure, it is impossible to deny that this is the group's best effort to date" and praised Millard's vocals as well as the album's "sparkling array of musical styles".[11]"
- Rest is fantastic
Track listing edit
- Great!
Charts and certifications edit
- The "Weekly single charts" box isn't necessary; you can remove this
End of GA Review: edit
Another good one! I have never listened to MercyMe but after all these reviews I probably should! Thanks and good luck! On hold for seven days to allow for any changes to be made. Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 18:37, 29 June 2016 (UTC).