Talk:Alice de Chambrier

Latest comment: 8 years ago by 65.96.86.166 in topic Biography style

Biography style edit

This is written like a doting book report by someone infatuated with Alice herself, it does not read anything like an encyclopedic article. A particularly grating line being "She died as she lived, silently." Much more is needed than simple citations, this entire article is written in an inappropriate tone for the purposes of Wikipedia. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.96.86.166 (talk) 06:38, 9 December 2015 (UTC)Reply