Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 23 August 2021 and 8 December 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Tolbert, R., Kaylynn Holt, Agsimeone. Peer reviewers: JStanfieldIII, LuisAlonsoxy, CrispDaniel.

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Notability?

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I don't believe that the subject is at a level of notability for inclusion here at the present time. Thoughts, anyone? --Stormbay (talk) 02:44, 31 March 2009 (UTC)Reply

singer too?

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There is also an Alex Lemon who sings in the song Inertia by Fragile by Armin Van Buuren. The voices are somewhat similar, I compared him to the singer, and it somewhat sounds like him singing but with a higher voice.

Eric Ramus — Preceding unsigned comment added by 199.195.166.103 (talk) 01:17, 25 December 2015 (UTC)Reply

peer review

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I think you guys are off to a good start but perhaps you could expand on his early life, personal life, or career. What I liked is the inclusion of Lemon's bibliography though because there is a dedicated section for his published works, I don't think it is necessary to mention them in the lead as well. Mariehurtado96 (talk) 20:25, 18 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

Changes to Alex Lemon page

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The information is provided neatly and cohesively but it uses a lot of references for the little information provided.

Crate a sub section titled “Honors and Awards” to talk about the award mentioned instead of including it in the paraphrase. It will be a short section but it still would be better.

A “Works” sub section is also needed to put all the books mentioned even if it means repeating the information. It just provides its own space for more efficient reading. IaniteSayn77 (talk) 20:47, 18 October 2021 (UTC)Reply