Talk:Alex DeBrincat

Latest comment: 2 years ago by HickoryOughtShirt?4 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Alex DeBrincat/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 17:38, 31 May 2022 (UTC)Reply

I will review this later. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:38, 31 May 2022 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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  • Can you WL Illinois or is that overlinking?
  • DeBrincat's offensive production improved during the COVID-19 pandemic-shortened 2020–21 season. DeBrincat followed this with his first NHL All-Star Game selection in 2022. Can this be expanded upon?
    • Expanded both.

Junior

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  • Erie general manager Sherwood Bassin had scouted him for Lake Forest's 8–2 rout... Scouted him for? Don't you mean "had scouted him during..."?
    • Fixed.
  • What was his NHL Central Scouting Bureau mid-term and final ranking? Can this be added? Did his stock rise throughout the season or stay the same?
    • Slipped my mind because the Otters website didn't include it. Added now.
  • Please WL Taylor Raddysh
    • Done.

Professional

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  • How was his training camp? How was his development camp/pre-season contests? It may also be important to mention the role trading Artemi Panarin had on the teams roster.
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      • Added, and also found a source explicitly mentioning how Panarin impacted DeBrincat's chances of making the roster.
  • You could also mention how the Blackhawks faired in the standings during his rookie season.
    • Done.

Personal life

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  • DeBrincat is also a DeBrinDad. [4]
  • He played in a video game tournament for charity in 2020 [5]
    • Added.

Sorry for the wait, HickoryOughtShirt?4! Everything has been addressed. — GhostRiver 15:23, 16 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

HickoryOughtShirt?4 Added a cited statement to "Personal life". — GhostRiver 17:21, 16 June 2022 (UTC)Reply
GhostRiver, thanks. Passing now! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 03:26, 17 June 2022 (UTC)Reply